A Mess of a Bedroom

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A MESS OF A BEDROOM

A mess of a bedroom,
Lies in front.
A mess of turmoil,
Lies inside.
The bedroom,
Can be tidied.
The hurt,
I can hide.

The rubbish,
In the bin.
The rubbish,
In my head.
The bin,
Can be disposed of.
My thoughts,
Cannot be said.

The Image,
Of myself reflected.
The image,
Of myself for real.
The image reflected,
Will disappear.
The real image,
Has to be concealed.

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tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
EVERY BEDROOM HAS A CLOSET

where skeltons try to hide, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Oh Geee havn't you heard a little thing called oh I don't know???? CLEANING UP???????? The time for you to think this 'poem' up could have been betterspent cleaning your room.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Secretive..

goings on in the messy bedroom... Nicely done.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
secret.

Living in secret solitude hiding feelings ~ for which other people might not approve. Surrounded by mystery.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A case where the reality cannot stand to be too closely scrutinized.

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