- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A Moment
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Thunder rumbles in the distance,
the air shakes from the sound.
Here, nothing moves,
then the first droplets hit the ground,
and the world erupts in chaos.
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- COMMENTS
Desejoalmost 10 years agoI think you could cut out some words and make it stronger. Nice job of catching the moment, as you intended.
Oldbear63almost 10 years agoExperienced it this morning, wish I could have stopped to watch it. I am working on something similar, about a cold front, but more focused on the clouds. Nicely done.
Ashesh9almost 10 years agoa Rain Poem :5-ed .
the lines:
Thunder rumbles in the distance ....
...air shakes from the sound ......
Very Realistic !!
