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Click herewetness
upon a river's bed
a body of water
lapping curves
adrift
under a light mist's kiss
a rippled
blanket of blue
rhythmic motions
curl around
smooth hard wood
pointing to the sky
absorbing
soaked in a driven current
pulsing from streams
pillow clouds shuffle
with moist kisses
limbs grace this body
then leaves
Awesome play with the words and the meaning. Left me alittle wet.<blushing
I like these words: lapping curves, curl around smooth hard wood pointing to the sky, moist kisses. Of course, pulsing, too. I always like that word. :)
I enjoyed this, MET. I do believe (IMHO) it would've read smoother if this poem was written in a few stanzas, and or have punctuation. Other than that, excellent!