- Erotic Poetry
- A Virgins Villanelle
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Teach how to love and simplify
Each artful touch caress my soul
Awakened thus to an ecstatic cry
Though I have yet a virgins sigh
Let feelings now my body instruct
Teach how to love and simplify
Each moment that I by you lie
Awaiting sensual pleasures fire
Awakened thus to an ecstatic cry
Beyond this hand upon my thigh
Reach deeper still and open wide
Teach how to love and simplify
I cannot now but love you by
Moon and stars that for me shine
Awakened thus to an ecstatic cry
Entranced and bold no longer shy
Bodies entwined upon this day
Teach how to love and simplify
Awakened thus to an ecstatic cry
- COMMENTS
WickedEvealmost 16 years agoThe majority of the poem reads very smoothly. Watch out for clichs, which is hard to avoid sometimes when you're working with such a strict form. You really have to rack your brain to come up with fresh phrases when you're restricted by the rhyme scheme. Still, it's a good effort and you get an A for effort!
champagne1982almost 16 years agoThis is a really fine response to the Erotic Villanelle challenge. It's full of tender denouement and answers the requirements of the form quite well. Good work on a difficult test! - CC
