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Click hereSo I crawled outside
I felt the sunshine on my face
It was blinding and warm
And I adjusted
Waiting until I could see
The birds I’d been listening to appeared
As did the water flowing
And all the sources of every seductive fragrance
And my timidity slipped away
It had to
I drank from the river to kill my thirst
And ate to loosen the knot in my belly
And still I was not satisfied
Then I saw the creature
The light went further away
Yet grew brighter, longer, and warmer
Indeed I began to sweat
And it would seem
The creature did too
It was different from me
It’s perspiration made it shimmer
With the waves of light
Came wafts of aroma I’ve never known
I trembled
I approached
Afraid and drawn
I wanted to walk away
No
I wanted to never have known
But I must know more
But I must no more
But I approached
And the creature acknowledged
As though it had not known all along
I was there
And the creature bared its teeth
Perhaps a smile
Iridescent eyes
Pulled me
Into the grass
My fingers swimming in the cool topsoil
I felt something
I was now further from my mind
Heeding instinct…soul
And the creature under me
Supine
Lifted its hips
I entered slowly
Colors changed around me
I rocked slowly into the hips
Cool breezes began to move across me
I heaved and the creature sighed
Shadows grew long
As the light and its heat wore down
And turned amber
There was rustling and crackling
And still I moved
Now in some state between the three corners
Of pain, oblivion, and bliss
I drove on
With deliberate vigor
And held the pressure at the end of each slow thrust
I was consumed
And I came
I came
I came like winter
A frost across the hills of flannel
The colors disappeared
With the light
I was tired and ready to digest myself
But I tried to stay outside the den
I tried
And she was a bonfire
Giving off antiheat
And I fell deep
Never quite making it
To the den
"But I must know more
But I must no more"
This sums up some of the best lines I have read in a while. I am impressed that you kept the flow of this going through such a jagged tumble of imagery. Very impressive. Good for you. I will actually go and read more of your work now. *grin*