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the feel of you
flows over me
as a weight of
two worlds
drenches us --
our sin
mingling
inside you
we soak
in my desecration
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twelveoonealmost 19 years ago*
I am a fan, I am not fond of these two lines, I feel, somehow that they could be better, to match the rest of this.
as a weight of
two worlds
Anonymousalmost 19 years agothis is my title
this is terrific. send it out, get it published or something :)
or not, just a suggestion.
~annaswirls
