Acid Dreams

Poem Info
236 words
4.17
4.2k
0
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

Two star crossed lovers at the end of their lives
A former hero with eternal strife
A far off star still shining bright
And a sweet red wine to bring the night

Burning ears and secret lies
A magical carpet taking to the skies
Some bad advice is a word to the wise
Come see the world through dreamers’ eyes

A hidden love letter sealed with a kiss
Naught but a fool can find eternal bliss
A wound down clock with echoing ticks
And a secret ingredient to add to the mix

Rock star dreams and mannequin dresses
A raven haired beauty with satin tresses
A lovely barmaid cleaning up messes
And partisan lies to appease the masses

Foxes on the prowl at a chicken coop
An ace reporter without a scoop
A sip of a cracker and a bite of soup
Civil action in a military suit

A new born baby and a box of cigars
Expensive tastes and ugly cars
Thrown aside gold nuggets and priceless pyrite bars
Sounds of a song drifting from afar

Butterfly dreams and caterpillar wishes
A veteran chef busy washing dishes
A lost little boy talking to the fishes
A hero to the people with plans malicious

A rolling camera on a broken down set
A twenty dollar payout on a fifty dollar bet
Finished with a journey but not done yet
A shooting star diamond knows no regret

Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
3 Comments
duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
exquisite

One line made it all worth while for me ~ "Butterfly dreams and caterpillar wishes.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Meter & rhyme with shallow content.

dreamsweetdreamsweetabout 20 years ago
so-so

each line had a theme that could be expanded, but this came out as something like a pop song, because it was too general, and I see a lot of cliches. Maybe take each one of the themes and give us something to focus on. It seems to have been done just for the sake of rhymes, and perhaps too much focus went into those rhymes.

Share this Poem