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Spring breeze
Lifting magical scents
Into the air.
Warming Sun
Sparks,
Bodily desires.
Season of renewing,
Reaches deep
In collective psyches
Mating dances
On acres wild
Young hearts,
Rejoice
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twelveooneabout 13 years agouh-oh Score 4
Mike this is a too obvious reaching for the poetic and heavily cliched.
"On acres wild" I read as inverted syntax, solely for the "poetic", the rest, a little more nouns, verbs, a little less "helpers".
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