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Click heretouch, stroke, kiss, squeeze,
press, bend, push, tease,
arch, twist, moan, lick,
laugh, bounce, squirm, kick
shake, crush, wince, scream,
grip, gush, gasp, cream
as I am a freak for verbs, love the action in your poem. I like it for lotsa reasons.
~ maria
Perfect rhythm, rhyme, and alliteration with great touches of humor make this a great poem that was a pleasure to read over many times. Good work!
You and Sweet Oblivion are the masters (er, mistresses?) Scratch that.
I didn't mean to say "Scratch that.". I meant to say....Oh, never mind.
Others could learn a lot from the both of you about how to write good erotic poetry is what I meant, of course.
Very imaginative.
and cleverly executed. it's not easy to make this sort of list poem work, but your use of end rhyme and, more subtly, internal rhyming/alliteration make this piece full of movement up and down the musical scale.
'cream' is the perfect ending.