Adam

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cold feet lament missing warmth
that stroke that does not belong
taboo -- too close
for comfort
shudder involuntarily as lips trail from warm feet subservient
up to virility, a compromising positiong.
The door is locked, the nod is bare
over the blankets gripped by four hands
toes curled
in the cold room -- a shiver
and I swallow
my pride

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Excellent

Pithy, precise and eminently recommendable - well done. S.O.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

first four lines, very good Consider line break here

shudder involuntarily

as lips trail from warm feet subservient

consider change

compromising positiong. to

my position compromised

last four lines say and do what you want

5ed

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
There are worse things to swallow.....

Pride gets in the way more time than not..... Interesting read, I believe you have a misspelled word in line 6..... Thanks for sharing...