Adam and Eve

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Adam asked Eve--what is an apple?--and he mooned her--do you like my apple? Each time he did it, Eve drew a "heart" on a five by three, and five golden stars. Then she would paint a big, bold A, and would hand the card to Adam.

One day Snake offered Adam to show him the Apple Tree. Adam chose to ignore Snake but Eve took Snake by hand and went to the tree and ate an apple and it was good, while Snake vanished in the bush and Eve forgot about Snake.

Adam kept mooning Eve, and Eve kept drawing five golden stars. She even added a fat "plus" to that fat "A".

  Senna Jawa ©
  2002-08-30

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tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

I wouldn't call this poetry per se but I did enjoy what you were conveying, and if this form is what moves you, more power to you.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very neat poem...

I wonder if the apple was a Macintosh or a PC. (Please excuse the blonde moment)

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Another version.

Since none of us were there ~ it could have gone that way.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Now that's a slightly different telling of the tale.

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