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bySunrockSin©

 
 an effervescent hiss
                echoes
        it's the sip
    a bitter burn
to the tip of the tongue
            sweet electric
    trembling
at the shock

        awaken
    and the fizz
fiz
    zles away
                        glass aside
reach for the quick twist
    and once again
        the emptiness
                                        echoes

 

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