Afar

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amans
amans
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A far off man
reached out his hand.
Strange yet so familiar.

His text onscreen
transporting me,
from doubt to trust:
in me rare.

He found a wall
in me, did crawl
and scaled my peak of fright.

I shared my fears
but cried no tears,
for strange man in the night
had promised me
that he could see
through fear, through fire,
to truth.

He knew.

A steady hand,
an honest man,
a sage,
a guard,
a youth.

His vile intent cannot be proved.
He’s bold and dares the comers
to tear him down.

Fall to the ground
you challengers in numbers,
for I can see
in front of me
a stranger dark and knowing.
From far away
with words he’ll say
his truth; be kind and loving.

He’s held my hand.
He’s lifted me:
repeated, patient caring.
That kind of man,
before my eyes,
needs no one else approving.

A far off man stakes claim in me.
My heart--pierced by his standard.
Reality brought him to me.
To his hand, I’ve surrendered.

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annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
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Wow another good one without any comments! Did some pop out late or something?

I was not crazy about the beginning, it felt weak, but grew stronger and more poignant as the poem moved on.

I wish I had this strength, actually. Well done, keep it up!

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