- Erotic Poetry
- AFF Haiku
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Click hereStrange town, discovered
Exciting rendevous, lust
Old friend met first time
- COMMENTS
Alpharoticaover 11 years agoI meant 5-7-5 of course .,. cant seem to edit comments after posted.. will have to rmember that,
Alpharoticaover 11 years agoPosted this already but cant see it so...
Great engineering 7-5-7 as it should be and with the word Lust that I think acts as an effective Kireji balancing strangness implied in the first line with familarity in the final line. I feel if you included a Kigo, then spring would be ideal, but this is of course optional in the modern form and being about love and lust I would argue it links to the heritage of natural things underpinning the japaneese origins and somehow adding an addition aspect of completeness (the point of this site notwithstanding)
All in all a pleasure to read.
Was it a challange to formulate?
HarryHillover 11 years agoAuthorexactly as it happened. ... Now your next clue ...yes Virgina, there is a Santa Claus ...Who am I?
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Thanks so verry much for the comment!!
