- Non-Erotic Poetry
- After the Crash
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Past hard-fought delay, and the assuring spring
Of snares well-regarded (few to count, but
A cordial portion) I catch my way
Recurred onto routine shallows, among
Lowlanders quick of surmise, if taxed
With quiescent invention
And mark the last nicks and notches
Poxed upon the searing sybilline blades;
New news is no news, wonder nothing,
Broadcast intransitive, signs and blooms.
I revel the abacus of body thrift
Finger beads curve sparkle honey
Doubtful stars and other turncoat pilgrims
Flash beholden, unlured but allured.
- COMMENTS
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agobut still not sure of meaning, so maybe you can explain it on the poetry form so wittle me understands. You have a poet's voice, the challenge is retaining voice and writing a poem that more than you understand. Nonetheless, I liked it as ear candy.
vrosej10about 13 years agoI got lost in this one too but it is very well written and good intentions sometimes get lost in the mix. I have enjoyed you work previously and will continue to do so I feel.
Angelineabout 13 years agosome works better than others and overall the effects overshadow the narrative--it sort of gets lost to me in all the metaphor and trick the eye technique. Still it's fluid and you write well. I'll be looking to reading more from you.
