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Click hereLeaden weight of the week gone
Par-tay-ing against my will
Contrived frivolity over melancholy prospects
Tinny sound of bar music blurred by booze
Making inane chit-chat
Dressed too hot striving to be too cool
Silvery glint of interest in smoky eyes
Scenting pheromone laced perfume
Dancing erect with the desire to be prone
Golden sunlight across an unknown carpet
Cuddling in a new lover’s arms
Hoping to find the panacea for loneliness
And prose to poetry. Lovely poem. Evokes the wonder of new love.
Fx
Letting the alchemy of your poetry sink in I broke the thermometer while passing 100C.
Sorry I could not locate your writes before as I was new on the site.LOVED IT.
Sizzling poem, but I agree with Evie when she mentions "Par-tay-ing" "cuddling" in her comments. Good stuff and I mention your poem in the PF&D.
I'd change Par-tay-ing and cuddling. They seem out of the place in this poem. One's too cute and the other is too... well, it's too par-tay-ing. lol The rest of the poem is really good. :)