Alchemy

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Leaden weight of the week gone
Par-tay-ing against my will
Contrived frivolity over melancholy prospects

Tinny sound of bar music blurred by booze
Making inane chit-chat
Dressed too hot striving to be too cool

Silvery glint of interest in smoky eyes
Scenting pheromone laced perfume
Dancing erect with the desire to be prone

Golden sunlight across an unknown carpet
Cuddling in a new lover’s arms
Hoping to find the panacea for loneliness

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Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisteralmost 15 years ago
Turning Lead to Gold

And prose to poetry. Lovely poem. Evokes the wonder of new love.

Fx

NaturemithyaNaturemithyaabout 15 years ago
Gosh

Letting the alchemy of your poetry sink in I broke the thermometer while passing 100C.

Sorry I could not locate your writes before as I was new on the site.LOVED IT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
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Sizzling poem, but I agree with Evie when she mentions "Par-tay-ing" "cuddling" in her comments. Good stuff and I mention your poem in the PF&D.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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I'd change Par-tay-ing and cuddling. They seem out of the place in this poem. One's too cute and the other is too... well, it's too par-tay-ing. lol The rest of the poem is really good. :)

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