- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Alexis in the Morning
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Click hereI reached out for you this morning
As I drifted into consciousness.
Of course, your place in bed was empty;
You had never actually been there.
It was still dark, too early to get up.
My mind settled into the feather pillow.
Then your hand touched mine.
Three quick squeezes, I, love, you.
We rolled towards each other.
The warmth of your body
Was like fire against mine.
The touch between us electric.
You swung your leg across mine.
'Good Morning' whispered softly.
Our lips met, hungry for each other,
Thirsty for each others love.
As we kissed, you pushed me back,
Then straddled and lowered slowly onto me.
I entered deep into your womb.
You sat upright, impaled upon me.
Even in the dark, I saw the blaze of your eyes,
Intense love beaming from your soul.
Then you faded with the soft predawn glow.
I cried for wanting you.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoEven though she's your fantasy lover and you'll have to clean up your own mess, I'd at least go with what WE suggested and change that line.
And yes, this should definitely be classed as erotic.
WickedEvealmost 20 years ago"I entered deep into your womb"
I would drop womb and change it to "I entered deep into you" because the penis never actually enters the womb. The womb/uterus is where a child is carried. The penis enters the vagina and stops at the cervix.
YDDalmost 20 years agoA short descriptive passage about a morning lover who wasn't there.
Fairly well written, but not very poetic.
One stanza gets fairly graphic.
And the last one is probably the best.
This should probably be in the erotic category.
