- Erotic Poetry
- Alter of Desire
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I lay down before you
on this alter of desire
its too late to back out now
when you have jumped into the fire
I shall let you taste the sweetness
on your tongue i will linger
but only if you beg me
may you suck the juice from your fingers
and when i open wide for you
know its never been about love
know that when i need you most
its only to be filled up.
- COMMENTS
london_james2010about 14 years agoI'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.
I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk
Thanks a lot and best of luck
James
PS The title of this refers even more to the photo, you're beautiful
