Amarillo Rose and a candles glow

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Amarillo Rose: part one
"A Candle's glow"

From brushy moon shadows
spurs, clank and chime
stepping to the threshold of Lady Laura's
two bits for a good time

Her candle flickered
brighten curtains red
meant she had no suitors
"come on and warm the bed"

Knocks on knotted wood
tips a hat and brushed back hair
boots a shuffle
a lonely mans desire's dare

Little 'creek'
two long fingered hands open the door
inviting smile in leather and cleavage
boot click smiles across the floor

Washington silver layed on a table
cupped fingers blow
stranding teathered hair curls fall on bare shoulders
red curtains lost it's glow

Dusty trail hand shed his leather
bed spread back with gentle taps feathered
Two oil lamps lit in one tender touch
intertwined like a tumbleweed clump

sheets prarie ridden
passion soothing soul
the other coin jingled grin
the warm wind blow

Haste ushered breasts
"come again senior" said sensuous
red candle's burning ora
On the threshold of Lady Laura's

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

part one of eight: Amarillo Rose
"A Candle's glow"

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Temple of the HeartTemple of the Heartover 19 years ago
your images have vibrant life to them

Art,

I love your work. I am an new poet on this site

and you were kind enough to comment on one of my pieces.

I think you mispelled "prairie" though.

I would invite you to see some of my recent postings.

Carol Anne

sacksackover 19 years ago
quite extraordinary...

and I liked the stanza about the tumbleweeds...good imagery! It might have read more smoothly if the "Little creek" line was a bit longer, to balance the rhythm!

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Wonderful... enticing..

Art just wonderful.. slowly draws one into the visual aspects of the scene..my favorite was..

Quote:

sheets prarie ridden

passion soothing soul

the other coin jingled grin

the warm wind blow

Nice...hmmm... I was there for a split second... on to more..

Du Lac

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
OK Art...

you've got my attention..on to part 2.

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
What goes on, behind closed doors*~

inviting smile in leather and cleavage

boot click smiles across the floor~

Ooohhh great lines here. Your imagery has a smile of its own. I loved the theme and subject matter.

Ya takin us on a trip, behind closed doors.

The whole *feel* of the poem is swaggeringly sassy~~!!<winks n grins>

Going to read the next one~!!

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