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Click hereAmarillo Rose: part four
"The Dueling Deuce"
Brisk wind blow a blizzard
snow capped mountains distant shore
two riders aproaching
chimney smoke inviting warm
gray skies gloom
boot kicks a broom
gun waving '45' bore
across the threshold of lady laura
screams rang out
smothered by chilling wind's howel
tight grip scowel
restraint taught grin a foul
tore fabric cry's
slapped red thighs
bed post hugs
bandito surprise
pulled taught curls
whipped jerked grasps
driving herd thunder
to a cool water well
bare tied and bound
scavengers scrounge
lusty feast and warmth of a fire
cold shadow whimpers cowar'
coin jingle smiles
new cheers whipped the night
wiggled hands release
movements were slight
glass tossed scatter
laughter that didn't matter
pride in what they had found
didn't see lady laura come around
coins flicker like silver rain
four shot deathening ring
smoke slithered from a bore
stood shaking was lady laura
Threshold clicks as heels were drug
around the back shallow dug
two horses collected, as fees, were barned
red hands washed from tathered and torn
pieces and life put back in place
long hot bath washes tears face
the night the chilling winds roaring arora
blew across the threshold of lady laura
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Amarillo Rose: part four
part one: "A Candle's glow"
part two: "The Abrasive one"
part three: "The Cattlemen's Lament"
part four: "The Dueling Deuce"
Every one of these are written with Art's flare. Which is fascinating and entertaining.
How much more can she endure. I loved this one too. A very differ ring to it, and yet..
She takes it all in stride and goes on. This is one tough lady. Love her courage and determination. I just seeem to think somehow.. she loves this life..even after all she has ben thru.
Just my opinion. More I say..
Have to know what happens next to this cheeky lil broad.(grins)
The stacatto rhythm of your lines and rhyme are entertaining and very good. Now, perhaps you can explore the more ballad-like story poems of EA Poe or Robert Service? I'm sure you would make some wonderful odes.