Amarillo Rose the dwelling

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Amarillo Rose: part five
"The Dwelling"

swinging summer sun
front porch rocking perch
brushing long wet hair
recalling romantic days

dossy do and around they go
gentlemen to gentleman
wild weed flowers offerings bold
and the one, her heart was stole

Tall dark and handsome grin
banderlero from the river of sin
back when she was pretty and thin
rocking to wistful thinking

Thunder hearts clashed
when she heard his laugh
his promises to Senorita Salena
warm heart chilled in the chest of lady laura

lonely night's spurs
was when the candle soon burn
income was the cumming
horsemen that were running

Taunts of her thoughts
as she rocked and rocked
unfertile dust in the land of the rock
dried up rose bush 'smirck'

brushing her long and speckled gray hair
survivals harsh raunching dare
slight corner smile
another rider rides across the mile

quick witted grin
"Oh, your back again,"
four feet shuffle
across the threshold of Lady Laura

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Amarillo Rose: part five
part one: "A Candle's glow"
part two: "The Abrasive one"
part three: "The Cattlemens Lament"
part four: "The Dueling Duece"
part five: "The Dwelling"

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postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Lovin it

You know, I am just not getting tired of this little series, it's awesome!

I am also amazed that some anonymous someone(s) is getting annoyed that poets aren't sticking to 'roses are red, violets are blue, jealousy sucks and so do you.' Woops, just hate to see a great poem get undeserved stupidity in the form of a zero rating.

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
WooHooo~~!!

(laughs n smiles)

Wow what a great ride yet again. So much in so few. Loved the imagery and the story picks up great. The timless effect here is ageless (as Lady Laura seems at times).

I can just see all the err dancing and smiling. Full of life an love it appears. More I say~~!!!

**sidenote**~~ I do believe this is GREAT POETRY~~!!! If one wants to read an write..Just pick your pen up an go for it.

If there is something you don't like about anothers writing . Then do try to be a lil more nice about it. If ya can't do that..well then STUFF IT..~!!

I do not like those who appear Anonymous and can not be *MAN* enough to sign their own name to their comments..Do ya have something to hide?~~GGRRRRR~~!!!

(Sorry Art for spouting off..If you feel you neded to delete my comment, I do understand..Love your series on the *Amarillo Rose)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not

This is not poetry. Gads, some people are lame.

AnnoraAnnoraover 19 years ago
You are making this a must read.

Enjoying morning coffee while reading these chapters starts my days well.

Keep coming Art~

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Yet another facet revealed

in this gem of a series. Time waits for noone, but Lady Laura has no such qualms.

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