An Evening T/together Part 10

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Part 2 of the 10 part series

Updated 03/18/2021
Created 07/15/2004
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Finally He reaches the top…all the cream now licked off from her body…she lays there spasming…emotional heights reached like never before for her…one orgasm after another hitting her wave by wave…wondering what else could He do…what more torture could He inflict upon her without going crazy.
He grins looking her deep in the eyes…looking into her soul…knowing the time was right…knowing what she was going through.
He climbs on top of her…kisses her softly…His hands running down the side of her body…as He slowly starts to enter her…just inching His way in…she gasps and squirms in delight at the feel of Him inside her.
He starts to thrust in and out…starting slowly then building up rhythm…she wraps her legs around Him…pulling Him in deeper…but He goes at His own pace…moving in and out…her breasts rubbing against His chest…crushed down by the weight of His body against hers.
As He builds up His rhythm so does she…moving against each thrust in accord of His…He goes in deeper and harder and faster…T/their lips locked in an embrace…the passion…the lust…the love showing in T/their eyes.
He wraps His arms around her…moving His hands down her back to her ass…squeezing it and going round it as He pulls her closer to go in deeper…she in turn grabs on tight with her legs…pulling Him closer…wanting His full length inside of her.
He thrusts harder…faster…deeper…His balls now bouncing on the outside of her moistness as He goes in as deep as He can…His kisses now becoming hard and passionate…His hands squeezing her ass harder.
Then all of a sudden He arches His back and thrusts in long and deep…and releases inside of her…she feels the liquid from Him warm her insides as she releases simultaneously…T/their juices mixing…T/they let all the juices flow out and then start to relax...His kisses becoming tender once more…then He removes Himself and lays next to her holding her in His arms…

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow

Contrary to the comment before mine, I loved this short story. It definitely excited me.. and another friend.. chuckles.

Wonderfully written.

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If you string all of the evening together you get a boring collection of "He did this, then that". Perhaps the image you had in your mind excited you as you put your words down, but you did not transfer any of that excitement to the paper. This is an excellent example of "telling" instead of "showing". It does not make for good poetry.

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