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Click hereLeave your name with a dude
as old as the place – if you’re lucky maybe
they’ll find some space for you in the back.
maybe not, though, it’s a happening place to be.
personally, I don’t see what the big deal is:
formerly blue air and old memorabilia
cover the walls with grime and give it an air of
decay; memorabilia of better times.
And I’ve had better wings.
It has been a long time since I have read any poetry here, and I am glad I ran into yours. You have a unique voice, unusual phrasing, I have a short attention span and you keep it every line. Keep on writing, girl!
Very original. This poem has been recommended on literotica's poetry forum in the poem poems review thread.