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Click herestare out at the wind-brushed sea,
like hollow windows on a cracked
sand castle
soon to be devoured by the unforgiving
lunar tide, then washed rudely
upon the sands
of a distant beach, only
to be resculpted
by little hands.
I think this was your best among the recent submissions. The sharp contrasts here between creation vs. destruction, randomness vs. intent, and youth vs. the absence of the "ancient eyes" came together nicely with an economy of lines; nothing superfluous here IMO. A high 5 for me.