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Porque no podre quedar contigo; lo siento.
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Make of me a thousand paper cranes;
of shadow and labored breath,
of the Lethe's water in your eyes,
of youth and moonlight
and the whispers between my knees;
of spiders silk and
hunger,
of words my mouth never learned,
of tangled limbs and salty fear,
or the dust between our lips.

If I unfolded a city in the sky
and carried you on an orange blossom breeze
to all the women I could be with you,

Would you know me in a siren's song?
Would you stay with me
here?

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WillowedCabinWillowedCabinalmost 13 years agoAuthor
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I just edited this poem and cut out the beginning stanza... because it was too bulky. Now, I'm not so sure. Maybe I need to find a pleasant middle ground. The original stanza that came before the 'make of me a thousand paper cranes' was:

Now, I would make a thousand moments for you

and fan them out beneath you in a wild splendor

and look up at you with weighty possibility

and ask of you to do impossible magic.

tango0919tango0919almost 13 years ago
wow

Speechless. This is beautiful; the imagery is magical.

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