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charm is the tune of a slippery tongue
seducing surrender with silk tension
binding sacrament with romandy bowlines
reminds me three times to never entertain a seductress
that expresses mild curiosity for my cock


the fourth knot secures need
to unleash my stampede from the west
spreading her thighs wide eyed
exposing a gleam of hope
that I'll tear her apart like the animal she wants


I slide her gown over ashen skin
curves and bone are my undoing and her redemption
I'm like a charming slug
meandering every nerve
devouring pink dandelions
blood stems and velvet rose lips


 pinched tight and bitten flesh as my hand crawls down her abdomen
like a huntsman tracking her soul deep inside the temple
I wipe her tears with sodden fingers where mourners weep
I offer scent and taste of desire
shoving it deep down the retches throat


tracing carved breasts, crossing starved plane
I feel her pelvis swing open as I reach her threshold
but I stop short of drawing her, leave her, 
pull her thighs apart
plunging face first into the breeze
I breathe the ocean that yearns me to her shores
     

begging me to dive into the undertow
wave after wave, smothering her with my hands
squeezing her between distal and middle, stroking gently
intensifying touch until pressure gauges roll into the back of her skull
I've hungered so long to taste her, but I live to feed her thirst


I torment the waters as I deliver my cruel curve across her lips
into humming kiss, slapping swollen flesh offerings with an open palm
pulling in the reins of her black mane, feeling her bite
tight is the hole in the back of her throat
and death is the breath that she sucks from my lungs

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Excellent. This is my favorite line: "I've hungered so long to taste her, but I live to feed her thirst"

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
mentioned

in the new poems review thread

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
and he's back

with a bang, interesting as always,

understand the usage

I'm like a charming slug

but I didn't like it, personal issue I think :-)

rest is deeply erotic,