Another Brick Falls

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It's the kindness you show every day,
Your encouraging words for all.
Your acceptance of my imperfections,
Yes, another brick falls.

It's how you lovingly cherish me,
It's how you always call.
To tuck me in and keep the dreams at bay,
Yes, another brick falls.

It's your steady breathing as you sleep,
It's time standing still when my name you call.
It's the peace I feel when I lie in your arms,
Yes, another brick falls.

Your gaze, your touch, your soothing voice,
Compassion, sensuality, emotions caused.
It's all these nameless, little things,
That allow the bricks around my heart to fall.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Look hard and you will find..

as you well did...a lover that will be kind...Nicely done.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
bricks

Every day in every way ~ my heart belongs to you.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Stronger than "How Do I Tell Him,"

And Welcome to Lit.

Each last line had me wondering

Where this was going

Until you summed it up so wonderfully.

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