Another Dream

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007s Girl
007s Girl
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Night falls, the moon lifts, I am at peace.
I lay down beside you, barely brushing your arm with mine.
We fall into the sky together.

Stars apear both in front of me and around me.
You're there, I feel you breathe.
Touch me.

Your hand touches mine, softly.
I stare up at the sky, falling
Up and down I fall, the stars blinding me
Your hand on mine

I smell your skin,
Words are meaningless
Farther we go into space
Floating
One with the worlds around us

Deeper I fall
I lose your hand
Reaching,
Clawing
I want to fight my way back

A kiss softly on my lips
I open my eyes
It youre there
Just another dream.

007s Girl
007s Girl
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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Pleasant

Til I hit 'stars apear' I was feeling pretty good about this one. A little more attention to correct spelling would enhance the loveliness of this rendering.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Lost in the feeling, but could use some tweaking to tighten it up some;

But for now that second to last line needs some quicky work

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