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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Thought it was perfect before,
 When a maniacal archer set the wheels in motion
 thrills began with screams and chills
 (This ride ain't for the faint hearted)
 coastin' to the exit, arrow between my eyes
 led away to the tilt-a-whirl, spun, circumnavigated,
 and as I became cognizant once again,
 noticed the blue fletched shaft
 protruding between your breasts, spoke,
 in surprise,
 'Damn, Baby, does that hurt?'
 you thwacked the one between my eyes, laughed,
 made me wonder, 'what ride is this...
 that sets the mind to buzzing so.'

HarryHill
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Arrow between her breasts 'n 'nother between your eyes : Harry were U born under

The sign of the Archer : Saggitarius ? 5-ed ( BTW today it's a virtual feast for the discernin' reader with U , GM , Dem all bursting on the NP screen together : Merry Christmas !)

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
I'm going to

ignore the arrow, trust me, you know the way my mind works

zero in on these two lines:

led away to the tilt-a-whirl, spun, circumnavigated,

and as I became cognizant once again,

very generally speaking "circumnavigated", and "cognizant" would be words to avoid, however, here it adds to the sense of vertigo, now do you need "once"?

5ed

buttersbuttersover 10 years ago
laughing x buzzing minds :)

like a graph

two lines

in different colours

one the shape of a rollercoaster

the second

a smooth, steady ascension

the trend is up, always up

the peaks and troughs

just part of the ride

as for arrows - they don't hurt a bit

unless they get torn out