tagNon-Erotic PoetryAs Good as a Mile

As Good as a Mile

bydemure101©

We walked the scented garden's dying light,
our feelings rosy and our hearts aglow,
when suddenly we felt our spirits go
as a slow shadow passed into the night:
shy happiness went by, inaudibly…
It wasn’t us that she had come to see.

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone03/10/13

5ed

although don't quite share the rosy glow

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by DawnJ02/01/13

Powerful little gem!

Well done!

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by Scheherazade7301/29/13

Wow.

Love this one. Very powerful.

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by SweetOblivion01/28/13

Brilliant - well done

Smiles S.O.

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by Ashesh901/27/13

Sadness , pathos , poignancy

Cometh alive in thy poetry , o fair Poetess !

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