- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Ashamed of my bad behavior
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I fell into this brutish period,
it was sudden and quite unexpected
but there I was with brutal feet
sweeping and stomping everything in sight.
All the tender things were crushed,
yet, oddly, I was okay with that,
except now I feel as empty
as an exhausted balloon.
Later, undoubtedly, I will apologize,
ashamed of my bad behavior.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoGood to see you back; hope we'll start seeing more from your mind with quality as good as this little piece.
foehn2over 16 years agoNicely written, and rhythmic. The sound flows nicely, and although I didn't much care for the word "except" -- I loved the simile of the exhausted balloon.
