aspiring to dream

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Liar
Liar
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tossing turning
early morning
dreams dreamt
cars, cats and cotton wool
floating in an endless sea

inquiring minds
want to know
how a dream dreamt me

waking up is easy
just accept and let go
but no
if only
hang on...

a minute longer
concentrate
on not concentrating
don't think the thought
not those words


It's only a...

no! shhh!
look, waves, pretty, see?
distraction, delusion

maybe maybe
saved from sanity
to this time
one time only
maybe see

if impact impacts
in the no man's land
of not quite real

when I hit surface
at whatever counts
as terminal velocity
around here
will I feel?

will imaginary
surface scorched skin
ever heal?

and when lungs breathe
ghosts of water
and I slide
into the numb

maybe maybe
dreams dreamt
will become real

because
who knows what happens
when dreamers believe
there is nothing else

to wake up to

 

Liar
Liar
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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
What happens?

Contemplating the long plunge ~ into everlasting oblivion.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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But you didn't answer that long eternal question that if you die in your sleep, will you ever wake up?

thegirlfriday11thegirlfriday11almost 20 years ago
hmmm

I like this poem

it made me happy and sad all at the same time

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
i will second that

wow!! excellent display of your way with words..my favorite part-

and when lungs breathe

ghosts of water

and I slide

into the numb

I know that feeling, its intoxicating, love this poem :)

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