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Click hereThe beauty of the male form lies not in action,
Nor definition,
But in guarded potential.
In gripping,
Pressing,
Almost beginning to move,
A suggestion of fearsome ability.
In feet.
Curve of the back
A hardened, rounded edge
That slides beneath the cloth or skin,
And waits.
The suggestion of the intellect,
Through the arms and hands,
To tense at words unspoke
Or read,
And twiddle through a thought--
Or toes,
Precise if aimless.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoWhat is better here,
That you've chiseled out the male form
Or seem to have stopped YDD cold?
Anonymousabout 20 years agoMethinks I know from whence this title comes. Could it be an ode to a certain frequenter of the GB? *smiling* It is - where ever the title comes from - a lovely work. A 5.
YDDabout 20 years agoFair play is.
Interesting words,
but you stop me with the title.
All I can find for "Atim" has to do with digital timing.
WickedEveabout 20 years agoA joy to read a poem about the beauty of the male form, and a poem well written.
