autumn 1996

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Updated 03/04/2021
Created 06/07/2002
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the long blade of cold
slides thru the closed window
and stabs my shoulder

a week ago
an agitated cloud of birds
settled for their rest stop
on the trees next to the highway
replacing the missing leaves

crowds of birds
would take to the air
like particles of pulsating smoke
in circles in spirals and back
to the trees

go! go! I shouted and waved my hand
half of the sky got dark
soon there was peace
around the leafless trees


wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
1996-11-02

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Remembering...

How sweetly evocative ~ birds making a rest stop on their way as they fly South. Ah...fond memories.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Solid imagery of a chill fall day.

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