Side by side;
our bare legs mold to
the old oak swing
you built years ago.
All is quiet except thoughts;
falling into our minds
after being connected.
Skin on skin;
our bare shoulders rest on
the red flannel shirt
I bought years ago.
All is still except breath;
spiked with cider
we made and perfected.
One on one;
our bare bodies join in
the familiar rhythm
we started years ago.
All is dark except candles;
fragrant with memories
stored and collected.
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Really lovely. I must get back to the 5 senses challenge - when it works, it really works. This one really works :)
Thank you :)
I appreciate feedback and suggestions. I must give credit to Desejo. This was the result of her words from the five senses challenge.
THE ELDER COUPLES
relive their past in the present, TK U MLJ LV NV
i wonder
if this wouldn't be better without
Side by side;
Skin on skin;
One on one;
esp. as lead offs
5ed btw
since that plastic spoon line i've been interested in your writing
Lovely, this one -
It instils a very tranquil mood - Thank you!
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