Autumn

bynjoyjade©

Side by side;
our bare legs mold to
the old oak swing
you built years ago.
All is quiet except thoughts;
falling into our minds
after being connected.

Skin on skin;
our bare shoulders rest on
the red flannel shirt
I bought years ago.
All is still except breath;
spiked with cider
we made and perfected.

One on one;
our bare bodies join in
the familiar rhythm
we started years ago.
All is dark except candles;
fragrant with memories
stored and collected.

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by Desejo11/01/12

Really lovely. I must get back to the 5 senses challenge - when it works, it really works. This one really works :)

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by njoyjade11/01/12

Thank you :)

I appreciate feedback and suggestions. I must give credit to Desejo. This was the result of her words from the five senses challenge.

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by tazz31710/29/12

THE ELDER COUPLES

relive their past in the present, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone10/28/12

i wonder

if this wouldn't be better without
Side by side;
Skin on skin;
One on one;
esp. as lead offs
5ed btw
since that plastic spoon line i've been interested in your writing

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by demure10110/28/12

Lovely, this one -

It instils a very tranquil mood - Thank you!

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