- Erotic Poetry
- Awakening
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I feel as if I have awakened from a deep sleep;
One that I have been experiencing all of my life.
Your touch, your lips, your words, your essence
Have made me feel renewed, invigorated, complete.
You have invaded my senses, my body and my mind
With your confidence, intensity and control.
As I think of you, the anticipation builds
Making me aware of myself as never before.
Like a butterfly, I emerge from my cocoon
Stretching, extending myself and testing my wings.
Metamorphosing into a new being.
One who has hope and faith; one who thrives to be alive.
With your guidance, I become more than the sum of my parts.
I become so much more than I ever imagined....transformed.
I reach for what I thought was unattainable,
Wanting to explore further, to know all.
- COMMENTS
f-cynyrover 18 years agowell done, you have given a excellent description of a sub emerging. you describe the realization, and coming to terms with being a sub, and the longing and for and surrendering to a dom, your dom must take good care of you . he is quite lucky.
Belegonover 19 years agoI enjoyed the way you used the triads in the first two stanzas and the concept of becoming more than the sum of the parts.
