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Awkward "Us"

byDs Padawan©

Something's wrong
Something's amiss
Something's different
In the way you kiss

The way you hold me
Isn't as tight
The way you hold me
Just doesn't feel right

When you're here
It isn't as long
When you leave
It just seems wrong

Let me know
All is okay
Let me know
It's still "our" day

Let me know
You still want me
Just let me know
There is a "we"

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by tazz31706/14/12

A DESCRIPTION OF "WE"

me n you, us, not thirds. TK U MLJ LV NV

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