Awoke

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I felt it warm and wet as the path was drawn,
winding down the fragile folds you worried
your way into.

Destroy my hoard of composure
Pleas of please hammer your ears
along with the insides of my thighs
as your face strokes along my skin.

You've discovered what's been waiting.
It's always been here
just below the surface, hidden
away from mortals.
Waiting to seeth up, awareness
beckons from one who understands.

You've broken into my cavern stash
of precious baubles, the most valuable
caught in your teeth and teased by your tongue.
This is what you've waked from slumber
and now you must take care of it.

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13 Comments
tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A MORNER FOR SURE

beats a nooner for maybe, TK U MLJ LV NV

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
Very fine work

second stanza is wondrous

JaneAustenJaneAustenalmost 16 years ago
Eyes open

S2 is packed with creative word choices and sensual visuals. S4 is a brilliant close to this piece and an overall great read!

ChuckRickmanChuckRickmanalmost 16 years ago
Just what I was looking for!

So THIS is how you do an erotic poem without being over the top, full of sensuality but still that erotic edge! Exceptionally well done.

MyhandsRtiedMyhandsRtiedabout 16 years ago
yup!

love your use of words! New @ this submitting poems soon!

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