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rikaaim
rikaaim
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aremem be ranc e o f tim ego ne b y  whenno onek ne wwh at i me nt  afu n puz l con trivedto dis play thetu rmoil

inmy head  wht luks to bea mundanepiece of jibrishis reallya wayto tryand fors anim age

What do you see?

lukhardertofindtheanswer

Me.

wootdousee

Do you know who I am?

illlet u i n o n a se cret

No one does.

th at's ally ou ' ll getf rom m e no w

I am.

bak t o thepl ace iw as mea nt t o b

Me.

an intr est ing tal e betw eent he li nes

Lies.

a hidd en mess age to ld pai nful ly obvi ous

Deceit.

lok pas t th sur fa ce  fi ndth ese hide n wo rds  loo ka t he re al me i n olong er ca re whooty ou thi nk

Myself.  Found.  Lost again.

amo ngst th voic es inm y hed  the y calmlo ng eno ugh fo r meto writ myw ay aga in

Home.

iami ndeed ho me

Free.

whe re i lo ng tobe

Done.

wit h allt he ha te andt he h urt

Moving on.

toa bet ter lifewh ere i wontg et hu rtanym ore

Goodbye.

toye ars ofp ainf ul suff ering Goodbye.

rikaaim
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE WONDER IS NOT

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
decision

After two years of painful suffering ~ a desire to say goodbye seems a natural decision.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Ohhhhh

The eye strain.

I think you might be able to get a prescription for what ails you.

turtledoveturtledovealmost 19 years ago
Interesting concept

I found your poem sad, to read so much suffering in the hidden words, make my heart ache for you. I hope you bounce back soon and find someone worth your affection!

Wonderful Poem--made my mind work-and that was great-Thanks!!TD

Honey123Honey123about 19 years ago
awesome

That was really cool...I got confused at first, since I have a headache and I was thinking, "Are my eyes going crazy!?!" But I thought this was really awesome!

~Honey

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