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Bambi's Tears

byMy Erotic Tail©

Rolling rubber
and Country Road
rollercoaster
thru thicket
and wilderness
with new beginnings
at every bend.

Pointing fingers
smiling eyes
and throttle release.
Jerking head glances
natures majestic beauty
oh so deer.

Long perked ears
and poka-dots
attentive and cautious
as the car stops
fawn motionless
still as wood
camouflaged
till white tail
like a flag
waves.

Sqeaking door
curiously
with helpfull intent
for youth
energeticly not
feet carry closer
leather boots
to an alert ear's
caution.

Watery eyes
sniffling nose
of a fawn
slightly spooked
but glued
next to it's mother
that was down
forever
down a country road.

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