bare flame in orchid forest

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 06/13/2021
Created 01/29/2004
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bare flame in orchid forest

over again
we darken our space till black and cobalt
match shade, your eyes are flame
the color of my desire
to blow onto your face
your nose, naked eyes

the cradle of each others arms

unprotected make up of
matter
untouchable matter
ghost stuff

two mirrors
broken in their own way
one happy
the other crying

so join the few
shattered lost
and found shards
good for mosaic
eye corner grit for glue
powdered lime

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
EMITTING SMOG AND SMOKE

to save the fruit, TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
enduring

Life is a mosaic of laughter - tears - sorrow ~ joys that go to make a mosaic of each person's life.

Mia MooreMia Mooreabout 20 years ago
mirrors

a life, a reflection

of perfection

is so quiet at times

then screams that Life is

what it is

and then some

:)

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
I can just agree

- this is balanced, tender, tasteful in every way.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
Your words are a timeless mosaic

just wanted to make sure you read these words again, they are so beautiful. Mirror mirror look at both:

"so join the few

shattered lost

and found shards

good for mosaic

eye corner grit for glue

powdered lime"

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