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Twisted, wicked wicker entwined
in tanned crevasses, damp, filled
in stilled motion, emotion paused
woven on a breathless cusp
as fingertip textures search softness
and a vibrant pressure presses deeper
into invitingly open – gaping
at the possibility of fullness
but held to a coursing heartbeat
desire peeked only in steel blue eyes,
heard in the trembled whisper
hovering with emptiness and want.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoAngeline has got it right — this is such a fun piece to read with all the creative wordplay employed. Enjoyed going back to read it aloud more than once; makes it a hit in my book.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoAlso, it has been mentioned in the Poetry Feeback and Discussion forum: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23117090#post23117090
Angelinealmost 17 years agoThe alliteration, the assonance, the double meanings and yet clear imagery. A good piece of writing and fun to read (fox in socks for grownups). :)
