Bath

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cymry
cymry
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What I ask is such a simple thing
though it causes her such woe.
Tears fill her solemn brown eyes
and she pouts her lip just so.
She lets loose and angry sigh
then turns her gaze away.
I can see that she's thinking fast
for any excuse to delay.
But after all I am her mother
and I can't help but laugh,
as she says in her angel's voice,
"But I don't want to take a bath".


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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AN LISTENING I REPLY

your too small/little for a shower. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
decision

Ah...the joys of Mother and daughter having a little one-sided discussion.

TrollyTrollyabout 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

I have to agree with the previous commentor.

"She lets loose and (sic) angry sigh"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
groan

it pained me to read this.Surely you can do better.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

So sweet in all her innocence,

how ever can you argue

with her impeccable reasoning,

so logical is its power ~

can see so well,

her plaintiff, soulful look - well done here

on this light piece.

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