Bathyl II

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(for Tracy)

 

 
This time I forgot my name, I forgot everything.
I let myself be taken by a wind that shook
warmth off my heart and veins off the leaves
of the trees, bent outside.

I'm not afraid.

The truth is I haven't yet searched
the memory, or even the hidden figures in the sky
nor the segments, which divide on my map
the countries, gods, slaves, navigators.

Shapes lose meaning in a thunderstorm.

You listen to time.

It's the imponderable logic of sounds came from heaven,
losing space on the way and making home in
the most remote fountains of self.

This time all was too much. I lost Venice,
didn't lose much. I lost Byzantium, lost a bit more.
But the blue, the colour, the mystery, the ocean, the ocean, the love, laying

by the poem of your seashore...

Now the undercurrent of water, of white lava, is a fountain of sound.

Hisses and whistles. Hurts.

The summer.

The symmetry.

This time I forgot your name
and lost everything.

 

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AMNESIA SURROUNDS ME

clothing all desires. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Remembering

I forgot everything ~ now all is lost.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
What's it all about?

Am I the only one who thinks this writer is so full of herself that she only strings words together without any concept of form or shape?

Honey123Honey123almost 20 years ago
Lovely

It's lovely, Lauren. It touched my heart as well as my soul.

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