tagNon-Erotic Poetrybeach neutral

beach neutral

bysandspike©

longnecks empty as tan lines darken
mind numbed to an ebb
loss of inclement reality
give a shit millibars rise
life lacks calamities
a calaract view rounds off the edges

beaches, beer, and a buzz
roberta flack accents the dream
black and white became a downy gray
life is good in neutral

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