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Click hereYou, to me, are Beautiful,
Beautiful like the sunrise touching the morning dew,
Beautiful as the sound of waves crashing on a beach,
Beautiful like the pure and unconditional love of a child,
Beautiful as the reflection of the moon glowing in a quiet pond,
Beautiful like the way the Orca whale mates for life,
Beautiful as music that caresses your soul and mind,
You, to me, are Beautiful,
The most beautiful soul I’ve ever known.
You could so elegantly sum up this sweet poem in one word ~ Beautiful.
Desirable, elegant, lovely, charming, graceful and... YES....'beautiful'
How many ways can you say the word beautiful ~ let me count the ways. A mood of real affection seems to hover over this sweet little poem.
A small suggestion for your consideration:
Too much repetition diminishes the impact of your poem;
Using the word beautiful just twice ought to be adequate.