Beauty

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demure101
demure101
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Oil on the quayside – rainbow looking glass,
cranes upside-down in technicolour, birds
come swooping up. Behind me there’s the port’s

sad bustle, somewhat tired, the former urge
long gone, and ineffective. On the bay
there’s an old tramp, uncared-for, battered, rust

an extra skin. The autumn sun outlines
the bridge and cables. She has come to roost,
not really wanted, lazy on the tide,

her decks abandoned and her crew paid off –
all her robustious lethargy aligned
with the squat town’s spent promises behind.

demure101
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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
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robustious lethargy aligned -this doesn't work for me, but WTF do I know, otherwise nice attention to word craft

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DAVY'S LOCKER ABOVE THE BED

is not bautiful TK U MLJ LV NV

NeonuroticNeonuroticover 11 years ago
Eye of the beholder

I enjoy photography and that scene would be something I'd capture. Good poem with an interesting view and word choices.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
nostalgia Thy name is Demure ,even

As you wistfully pine for the glory days of a cargo ship , now put to pasture !!

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