- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Beaver Moon
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Shine full in the crackling night and light my way.
The air rippling, like waves, behind me
swimming in depths, too deep to freeze.
A silken breeze sighs across my skin,
cold and flowing in the bright gleam from your face,
wise and whispering a welcome to winter.
- COMMENTS
tazz317almost 12 years agoyou cant hjave one with out the other. TK U MLJ LV NV
duddle146about 17 years agoA poem with beautiful metaphors and lovely word pictures that enhance this rendering.
LeBrozover 17 years agoFeel drawn in to a chill winter night
Rather nicely done.
And look ~
there's the word 'like' - reminds me of vampiredust's thread...
flyguy69over 19 years agoAgain I expect dirty talk and get beautiful poetry! I suppose it is wonderful in its own beautiful poetry way....
annaswirlsover 19 years agodreamy!
I want to say something about the aliteration but I cant think of how. I think they might sound better broken up by lines, but I would have no idea how to do it!
beautiful, you over achiever you!
