- Erotic Poetry
- Because I Have The Power
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Click hereIf I choose to be dirt,
belly low dirt,
crawling after your heel,
then I will be dirt.
And dirt will be a pleasure,
because I make it so.
If I choose to be used,
then it will be thoroughly:
Slave, not a drop
down your throat.
Not yet.
Cross the room,
slide down wall's
sunlight,
to the floor,
spread in beauty,
brutal and bruised,
mouth brimming.
Make me hard
once more.
I will leave you full
below, behind,
your belly, after I allow you
to finally gasp.
Say this with control
and I will obey,
and I obey,
because I have the power.
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copyright d. dixon
02.01.05
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- COMMENTS
tazz317over 11 years agois but a figment of self respect. TK U MLJ LV NV
Sadeanover 15 years agoI don't know if I have the vocabulary to describe this poem, so I'll have to live with one simple word: WOW!
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agooh that is just ridiculously hot. I can't really get into the language-level critique because it's too ridiculously hot. Once again, you've done a very intelligent and subtle thing with a topic that is hard to address without being overdramatic. Excellent. And Hot.
normal jeanover 15 years agoexpression of how the sub is in control because he/she chooses and being sub does not mean that she is being abused. So many people misunderstand such a special relationship. You are fortunate to have found Him.
re the poem itself. I liked the structure and the tone. You express confidence and the poem was easy to read, not uncomfortable as some poems of this nature end up. Good work :)
