bedtime story

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lobomao
lobomao
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Remind me
Of the rules
The game of want
Left wanting
Terrible lines
This that way
Red light doublestopped
I get to watch
Whiles whiley smiley you
Come hithering and retracting
Choose another and another
Bow to your partner
Do say do
Go to your corner
Sashay around the ring
Promenande a trios

Its unfair
You say
For me to wait
Till you are done
With all your fun
Ready to settle
Is that for me
We wait and see
To settle that score

you left
you said
for him
you said
not really
you said
it’s more
you said
than you
you said
but you
I said
are more
you said
how sad
I said
I love you
you said
more than I did
you said
when I said
I love you

This tired nursery rhyme lies
Torn pages on the floor
Shattered quilts of feather quills
That may have once kept us warm
Discarded toys no longer tooly
Toneless musical instruments
Left breathless with whispers of tomorrow

Twinkle twinkle little star
How I wonder where you are
A tone alone
Hi c and a second
Coming down from a fifth
This melody is useless
But oh and oh well
All I have is a broken crown
While Jill is left with jack
I put the crib unused away
Along with all my other childish dreams

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Different.

Jack and Jill lives a nightmare ~ in despair.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Here's an unusual bedtime tale, for the adults, and not meant for the sharing {explaining this to a 3 year-old could get a bit complicated}.

wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 18 years ago
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i like how different this poem is. thank you for sharing your writing.

wso

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